Amazingly atmospheric, the heat is almost palpable~ Will you be posting your story on dA when you finish it? I'd be very interested in reading it (if you could share the summary of the story at least, that'd be great)
I will probably post it at some point somewhere, maybe on a separate website (or make it into flash, like I did with my short poem a while back ), just for a more pleasant read. But it's just not finished yet, so I don't really know. For now I'll be posting a few older pieces which I will replace later anyway, they shouldn't spoil much of the plot or anything like that.